(at the last minute, this became a poem for @feckedyfecker, through a crucial but minor addition. Offered in the hope someone somewhere thinks similarly of her. And thanks to @kattcalls, who really should be writing these herself...)
love
sleeps here
locked in
an embrace
a dream
lights up your face
your eyelashes
flutter
like the wings
of a blackbird
your skin
as delicate as silk
and i
watch you
reluctant
to break the silence
too much in awe
of it
to say a word.
Lovely...particularly like the blackbird reference. Are you familiar with Wallace Stevens?
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Lovely!
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