what day
is it
today
we left
a month ago
or so
and since
then there was
Maryland
close to
Baltimore but
not there
maybe
a state park
or a gothic church
not like
that time
in Florida
three days
were well below
freezing
more like
Arkansas or
Corpus Christi
but not Quebec
at least
not yet
was it
two weeks
or ten days
the Smithsonian
alone
would take a week
and more
particularly down south
it is congested
to sit and eat lunch
in an old train
someone has imagination
so many friends
never travel
so much unseen
life
must be like
a waiting room
but we
move on
restlessly
looking for
something
perhaps an end
you never know
you might catch it
unawares
hiding
from us
in the trees
waiting for
a chance
to pounce.
You don't have to share this comment if you don't want (or, feel free). Do you like negative feedback? Or, rather, welcome it? This is the first of yours I've read that I said, "huh?" without connecting. Unfortunately, I have no idea why.
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