tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8233423078353444236.post2948387371615716850..comments2023-10-29T02:59:25.165-07:00Comments on MrWordsWorth: Verse: three lil poems for June 11, 2010MrWordsWorthhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/03174426017121044737noreply@blogger.comBlogger3125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8233423078353444236.post-33558125357715907542010-07-04T02:10:52.058-07:002010-07-04T02:10:52.058-07:00"it is afraid
to let us wander
into the morni..."it is afraid<br />to let us wander<br />into the morning<br />in case we<br />don't return"<br /><br />Amazing!Dani Hnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8233423078353444236.post-40714359688592714542010-06-11T15:20:41.152-07:002010-06-11T15:20:41.152-07:00The second one lingers. There is much pathos in th...The second one lingers. There is much pathos in that question, "to whom," which could be rhetorical, or too late (ouch).S.L. Corsuahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/10299376651709536034noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8233423078353444236.post-69062308788139534402010-06-11T15:05:24.611-07:002010-06-11T15:05:24.611-07:00"negotiated
in confessions"
that couple..."negotiated<br />in confessions"<br /><br />that couplet has inspired a poem for me... thanks for sharing.Naturally Alisehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/16587741755923221587noreply@blogger.com